new stationery design

This design is in the early stages, but I really like the way it's going. It's kind of a departure from my usual short/chubby/childish style. The way I've depicted this woman is actually the way most of my designs start in my notebook only to be modified into the style you've seen in the past. In my opinion, somehow, the tall and lean look suits this particular design. do you think it works?


here is an example of how I usually design girls-